Do you like going to crowded places? Why or why not?
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I like go to famous place when no many people but like many people when I go shopping .
The store owneowner only looks at me, when no many people in shop
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Hello, Lily!
I totally agree! I feel the same way, especially when shopping. I don\'t like being watched as if I will do something wrong, so having a lot of people around can make me feel comfortable when shopping.
- T. Caitlyn
I like go to famous place when no many people but like many people when I go shopping .
>> I like to go to famous places when there aren\'t many people, but I like having many people around when I go shopping.
The store owneowner only looks at me, when no many people in shop
I like go to famous place when no many people but like many people when I go shopping .
>> I like to go to famous places when there aren\'t many people, but I like having many people around when I go shopping.
The store owneowner only looks at me, when no many people in shop
>> The store owner only looks at me when there aren\'t many people in the shop.
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