Do you like going to crowded places? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t like going to crowded places.
I feel like this, my energy is disappered when I\'m in a crowded places.
And If I go to crowded place, heavy treffic jam is mandatory.
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I don\'t like going to crowded places.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I prefer to avoid crowded places.
I feel like this, my energy is disappered when I\'m in a crowded places.
>> I feel like my energy disappears when I’m in a crowded area.
And If I go to crowded place, heavy treffic jam is mandatory.
>> Also, if I go to a crowded place, heavy traffic jams are inevitable.
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