Do you like going to festivals?(ANSWER)

2018-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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I like going to festivals. Because there are many things to see and eat. Also I can have various experiences. Most of all, I like to experience and challenge. For example, I like experiment, making, cooking, solving questions, and algorithm. So, I like going to festivals!:) Thank tou for reading! By. [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

  

HOMEWORK:

 

Do you like going to festivals?

Answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

I like going to festivals.
Because there are many things to see and eat.
Also I can have various experiences.
Most of all, I like to experience and challenge.
For example, I like experiment, making, cooking, solving questions, and algorithm.
So, I like going to festivals!:)

 

CORRECTIONS:

I like going to festivals.
Because there are many things to see and eat.
Also
, I can have various experiences.
Most of all, I like to experience and
be challenged.
For example, I like experiment, making, cooking, solving questions, and algorithm.
So, I like going to festivals! :)

 

** [이름], once again, well done. ^^ Just a few corrections in your homework. Teacher feels awesome! ^^

 

Speak with you on tomorrow. J

 

   ---------T. Alexia----------

 

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