Do you like going to festivals? Answer in complete sentences.

2018-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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I don't like going to festival. because when I go to festival it's mess it and loud. but it depend on the festival. some festival is lound some festival is not lound

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Do you like going to festivals? Answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

I don\'t like going to festival. because when I go to festival it\'s mess it and loud. but it depend on the festival. some festival is lound some festival is not lound

 

 

 CORRECTIONS:

I don\'t like going to festivals. Because, when I go to festivals, it’s a mess and it’s loud. However, it depends on the festival. Some festivals are loud, some are not.  

 

** Dear [이름], thanks once again. J Please take note of the corrections. Thank you. ^^

 

Speak with you soon. J

 

   ---------T. Alexia----------

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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