Do you like going to parties?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like going to parties .
First, I like birthday party because I can recive gifts.
Second , I like pajama party because I can play late with my friends.
Lastly,I like hallowen party because it\'s fun to dress up.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
I like going to parties .
>>CORRECT
First, I like birthday party because I can recive gifts.
>>First, I like celebrating my birthday party because I can receive gifts.
Second , I like pajama party because I can play late with my friends.
>>CORRECT
Lastly,I like hallowen party because it\'s fun to dress up.
>> Lastly,I like halloween party because it\'s fun to dress up.
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