Do you like going to the beach? Why or Why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like going to the beach, because I love the everything of beach.
If the weather is good or not, the landscape is always awesome.
But the most wonderful time in beach is summertime, when the sun is scorching.
Getting a tan and drinking lemonade by the beach are one of the happiest thing what people can do in summer.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
If the weather is good or not, the landscape is always awesome.
But the most wonderful time in beach is summertime, when the sun is scorching.
Getting a tan and drinking lemonade by the beach are one of the happiest thing what people can do in summer.
I like going to the beach, because I love the everything of beach.
>>I like going to the beach, because I love everything about beaches.
If the weather is good or not, the landscape is always awesome.
>>CORRECT
But the most wonderful time in beach is summertime, when the sun is scorching.
>>CORRECT
Getting a tan and drinking lemonade by the beach are one of the happiest thing what people can do in summer.
>>Getting a tan and drinking lemonade by the beach are the happiest things what people can do in summer.
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