Do you like going to the parties? (why? explain)
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I like going to the parties with my friends.
I have best friends who graduated high school with me, some of those have married, so there are few chance to meet together.
So the party time can meet my friends is so special.
We can talk to each other about a company they go to work, their family\'s recent conditions and what\'s going on in the world with beer and soju.
It\'s so precious time to me.
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I like going to the parties with my friends.
>> I like going to parties with my friends.
I have best friends who graduated high school with me, some of those have married, so there are few chance to meet together.
>>Some of my friends since high school are already got married. So, I don\'t always get the chance to see them.
So the party time can meet my friends is so special.
>> That\'s why, whenever we meet and hold some parties, it\'s quite special.
We can talk to each other about a company they go to work, their family\'s recent conditions and what\'s going on in the world with beer and soju.
>> We usually talk about our jobs and companies we work for, we also talk about our families and the things that are going on around the world over some glasses of beer and soju.
It\'s so precious time to me.
>> It\'s a very special moment for me.
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