: Do you like having visitors at your home? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
To be honest, I don\'t like coming at my home.
Because I have to clean, organized well in my house and to cook and then I feel tired.
Instead of, I\"d like to meet out, at the cafe or restaurant.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
I understand your point.
Let\'s just work hard on your sentence structure.
Thank you for sharing today.^^
~~Teacher Sharon
To be honest, I don\'t like coming at my home.
>> To be honest, I don\'t like coming home.
Because I have to clean, organized well in my house and to cook and then I feel tired.
Because I have to clean, organized well in my house and to cook and then I feel tired.
>> It\'s because I have to clean, organize my house and cook which make me feel tired.
Instead of, I\"d like to meet out, at the cafe or restaurant.
Instead of, I\"d like to meet out, at the cafe or restaurant.
>> I just like meeting someone at a cafe or restaurant instead.
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