Do you like helping others? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. When I look people in need in the bus, I yield my seat. Because I think them too hard.
강사 첨삭
Hi Na [이름]! That’s very kind of you. Giving your seat shows you care about others.
~T. Jenna
~T. Jenna
>>Yes. When I see people in need on the bus, I give them my seat.
OR
>>Yes, I do. For example, I usually offer my seat to people in need when I am on the bus.
Because I think them too hard.
>>I do this because I think it is too hard for them to stand.
OR
>>I do this because they may feel weak or uncomfortable standing.
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