Do you like keeping a diary? What do you want to write about?
학생이 쓴 원문
Every new years, I try to write a diary, but I fail because I have compulsion about write it everyday. But when I have nothing to write, I am in a dilemma.
If I write a diary this new year, I will write about my trips.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Take note of the patterns and vocabulary words used.
Your ideas would be clearer if expressed this way.
I hope you learn a thing or two from this.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Every new years, I try to write a diary, but I fail because I have compulsion about write it everyday.
>> Every new year, I try to write a diary, but I always fail because I feel compelled to write every day.
But when I have nothing to write, I am in a dilemma.
>> However, when I have nothing to write, I am suddenly in a dilemma.
If I write a diary this new year, I will write about my trips.
If I write a diary this new year, I will write about my trips.
>> Correct
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