Do you like knowing and finding out secrets? Why?
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Do you think you get along with your friends if you know all of your their secret? I disagree with that. When I was a teenager and before, I thought that knowing all about my friends is true friendship. When they didn\\\'t tell me everything about them, I disappointed and was angry at my friends. It was so funny and ridiculous, I am ashamed when I think in my past. I didn\\\'t know how to make friends and how to keep relationships at that time. Now I\\\'ve totally changed as much as I head I look indifferent to others. I am not indifferent to my friends and I pay attention to them. But I never ask them even if they look sad and something wrong before they tell me in advance. I am always open with them and prepared to listen. Nowadays I think the most important of relationships is \\\"Listening\\\". There are many people who can tell you advice, but few people who can listen to your story with sympathy. I prefer a listener to a speaker for them.
(I confused it again, Sorry)
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1. Do you think you get along with your friends if you know all of your their secret?
>> Do you think you will get along with your friends if you know all of their secrets?
2. I disagree with that. When I was a teenager and before, I thought that knowing all about my friends is true friendship.
>> I disagree with that. Before becoming a teenager and during my teenage years, I thought that knowing all about my friends is true friendship.
3. When they didn\\\'t tell me everything about them, I disappointed and was angry at my friends.
>> When they didn\'t tell me everything about them, I was disappointed and angry at my friends.
4. It was so funny and ridiculous, I am ashamed when I think in my past.
>> It was so funny and ridiculous, I am ashamed when I think about my past.
5. I didn\\\'t know how to make friends and how to keep relationships at that time.
>> CORRECT!
6. Now I\\\'ve totally changed as much as I head I look indifferent to others.
>> Now I\'ve totally changed. They tell me I look indifferent to others.
7. I am not indifferent to my friends and I pay attention to them.
>> CORRECT!
8. But I never ask them even if they look sad and something wrong before they tell me in advance.
>> But I never ask them even if they look sad and there\'s something wrong before they tell me in advance.
9. I am always open with them and prepared to listen.
>> CORRECT!
10. Nowadays I think the most important of relationships is \\\"Listening\\\".
>> CORRECT!
11. There are many people who can tell you advice, but few people who can listen to your story with sympathy.
>> There are many people who can give you an advice, but there are only a few people who can listen to your story with sympathy.
12. I prefer a listener to a speaker for them.
>> I prefer to be a listener than a speaker to them.
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