Do you like listening to music? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I like to listen to music. When I want to feel my emotion, I can do that through music. Bright music makes me happy and I am comforted by the sad concept of music. It makes my life more emotional.
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Let\'s try to correct your sentences:
Yes, I like to listen to music.
Yes, I like to listen to music.
>> Yes, I like listening to music.
When I want to feel my emotion, I can do that through music.
>> When I want to be emotional, I just listen to music.
Bright music makes me happy and I am comforted by the sad concept of music.
>> Bright music makes me feel happy and I feel comforted by the sad concept of it.
It makes my life more emotional.
>> It makes me more emotional.
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