Do you like making new friends?
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It\'s half and half.
It\'s because feel awkward and I want to make new friends.
It\'s also tired.
The friend is also you may be arrogant.
These are I like make my friends and I don\'t want to make my new friends.
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It\'s half and half.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s because feel awkward and I want to make new friends.
>> It\'s because I feel awkward even if I want to make new friends.
It\'s also tired.
>> It\'s also tiring.
OR >> It also makes me feel tired.
The friend is also you may be arrogant.
>> For another person, you may look arrogant.
These are I like make my friends and I don\'t want to make my new friends.
>> These are the reasons why sometimes I like making new friends, and sometimes I don\'t.
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