Do you like making plans with friends or do you like spontaneous plans?
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Well, I\'m a tourist who makes a reservation about accommodations and transportation ahead of the schedule. But, I prefer spontaneous plans than making plans. I don\'t know what\'s going to happen like bad weather, traffic jams, and pickpocket. It\'s funnier than making plans because I couldn\'t expect. And, I don\'t believe everything goes well as my plans. That\'s the reason why the trip makes me excited. So, please amigo!!! Stop staying at home. Even if you\'re a homebody and you don\'t have enough money, it\'s a waste of time in your life. And, if you don\'t have someone to do, you\'ll just try to do alone!!
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Well, I\'m a tourist who makes a reservation about accommodations and transportation ahead of the schedule.
>> CORRECT!But, I prefer spontaneous plans than making plans.
>> CORRECT!I don\'t know what\'s going to happen like bad weather, traffic jams, and pickpockets.
>> CORRECT!It\'s funnier than making plans because I couldn\'t expect.
>> It\'s funnier than making plans because I couldn\'t expect it to happen.
And, I don\'t believe everything goes well as my plans.
>> And, I don\'t believe everything goes well as what I planned.
That\'s the reason why the trip makes me excited.
>> CORRECT!So, please amigo!!!
>> CORRECT!Stop staying at home.
>> CORRECT!Even if you\'re a homebody and you don\'t have enough money, it\'s a waste of time in your life.
>> CORRECT!And, if you don\'t have someone to do, you\'ll just try to do alone!!
>> And, if you don\'t have someone to do it with, you just have to do it alone!!
[Now that you have mentioned it, I am planning to go on a trip alone. HAHA! ~ T. Camille]
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