Do you like meeting new people?

2020-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I don\'t like meeting new people. l don\'t like the uncomportable atomosphere when l am left with new people. And I\'m not a sosiable person, so l can\'t smoothly connect conversation. Meeting new people is so hard for me.

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I don\'t like meeting new people. l don\'t like the uncomportable atomosphere when l am left with new people. And I\'m not a sosiable person, so l can\'t smoothly connect conversation.
>> I don\'t like meeting new people because l hate the uncomfortable atmosphere when l am left with persons I just met. And I\'m not a sociable person, so l can\'t smoothly start or hold conversations with anyone. 

 Meeting new people is so hard for me.
>> correct~~
>> or: Meeting new people is a real challenge for me. 

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