Do you like meeting new people?
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Yes, I like meeting new people. I always try to meet new people for example, joining a club, going to volunteer, and getting a part time job. I usually start talking to other people and try to keep communication. I like to make my new relationship with other people. As this reason, meeting a new person makes me happy and cheerful.
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Do you like meeting new people?
Yes, I like meeting new people.
>> CORRECT~~
>> OR: I have to admit that I enjoy it.
I always try to meet new people for example, joining a club, going to volunteer, and getting a part time job.
>> I always try to get acquainted with new people, for example, by joining a club, volunteering, and getting a part-time job.
I usually start talking to other people and try to keep communication.
>> I usually initiate conversations with other people and try to maintain our communication.
I like to make my new relationship with other people.
>> I like to create new relationships with other people.
As this reason, meeting a new person makes me happy and cheerful.
>> For this reason, meeting a new person makes me happy and cheerful.
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