Do you like meeting new people?
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I feel easily tired when I meet the people in the first time. Maybe, in my opinion, usually, I\'m not emotional or have a lot of ideas. So, it is a hard thing for me to express myself. Therefore, I want to be the person who can feel various emotion or have a good sociability.
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Do you like meeting new people?
I feel easily tired when I meet the people in the first time.
>> I feel easily tired when I meet people for the first time.
Maybe, in my opinion, usually, I\'m not emotional or have a lot of ideas.
>> NOTE: I\'m not quite sure if I got the idea in your sentence right. But here\'s my interpretation.
>> I suppose, I\'m not an emotional person and I think too much or overanalyze things.
So, it is a hard thing for me to express myself.
>> OR: That\'s why I have a hard time communicating my thoughts and feelings.
Therefore, I want to be the person who can feel various emotion or have a good sociability.
>> Therefore, I want to be a person who can feel various emotions or be sociable and outgoing.
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