Do you like meeting new people?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I like meeting new people.
I meet new people,I can make new friend, I can play with friend.
So I\'m happy.
강사 첨삭
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Do you like meeting new people?
Yes, I like meeting new people.
>>> CORRECT~~
I meet new people,I can make new friend, I can play with friend.
>>> If I meet new people, I can make new friends and play with them.
So I\'m happy.
>>> OR: This makes me happy so I like meeting new people.
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