Do you like meeting new people?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t like meeting new people.
When I meet new people, I feel nervous.
Also I think looking at new people\'s eyes is difficult.
So I want to meet only familiar people.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] In!
This is your first revised composition for our class. I appreciate your sending it. You can see the corrected version below. Have a good night\'s sleep!
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Jean~~
Do you like meeting new people?
I don\'t like meeting new people.
>>> OR: I’m not comfortable meeting new people.
When I meet new people, I feel nervous.
>>> OR: I get anxious when I meet new faces.
Also I think looking at new people\'s eyes is difficult.
>>> Also, I think making eye contact with new people is difficult.
>>> OR: I struggle with eye contact when meeting someone for the first time.
So I want to meet only familiar people.
>>> OR: That\'s why I prefer interacting only with familiar individuals.
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