Do you like meeting new people? (3-5 sentences)
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I like meeting new people, because it gives me chances to get better understanding to know more about human being.
>> I like meeting new people because it gives me chances to get better understanding of human beings.
People chat with various issues following their interests, and it gives us better views to get to know new world we didn\'t experience before.
>> People chat about various issues related to their interests, and it gives us better views in getting to know a new world that we didn\'t experience before.
Listening their chat, I can get some informations from new worlds, and also can enjoy the joy of communicating.
>> Listening to their conversation, I can get some information about new worlds, and also can enjoy the joy of communicating.
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