Do you like meeting new people?

2018-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I’m a activactor people, so, I love to meet something new people and make new friends. I enjoy the time that I can know new relationship about people. But, it is not whole people, because some people think such character feel burden. For that reason, I try to come up carefully when I meet someone new. However, I believe this character has large advantage while we live our life.

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Jean


I’m a activactor people, so, I love to meet something new people and make new friends.

>> I\'m an active person so I love meeting new people and making new friends.


I enjoy the time that I can know new relationship about people.

>> I enjoy the time that I can form new relationships with other people.


 But, it is not whole people, because some people think such character feel burden.

>> But not everyone thinks the same as some people feel burdened with such a character.


 For that reason, I try to come up carefully when I meet someone new.

>> For that reason, I try to be cautious when meeting someone for the first time.


However, I believe this character has large advantage while we live our life.

>> However, I believe that this kind of character has a big advantage while we live our life.

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