Do you like meeting new people?
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Yes, I like meeting new people. Because when I meet new people I can be a friend of them. Also meeting many people is good for me. I am displeased little bit, but I like to meet people because I can grow sociality.
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Jean
Yes, I like meeting new people. Because when I meet new people I can be a friend of them.
>> Yes, I like meeting new people because I enjoy making new friends.
Also meeting many people is good for me.
>> Also, meeting many people is good for me.
I am displeased little bit, but I like to meet people because I can grow sociality.
>> I\'m not always pleased when I meet strangers but I know that I can at least grow socially.
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