Do you like meeting new people?

2019-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I do not like meeting new people anymore. When i was young i always wanted more and more friends but I changed now. It\'s more important which is \" Do i have truly friends around me? \" I think that I value substance more than quantity of friends. I met a lot of people while i lived in other country. When we got along together, we were happy and we had fun even though we don\'t keep in touch anymore. It\'s a precious memory also I met some of really good friends but most of them are just passed by that\'s why I don\'t really like to meeting new people anymore. (But one of funny thing is what my writing is it doesn\'t make sense because I am using Instagram and i am always keep on eyes how many new followers do i have? )

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


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Cheers!

Jean


I do not like meeting new people anymore. 

>> or: I don\'t find meeting new people interesting any longer.

 When i was young i always wanted more and more friends but I changed now. 

>> I always wanted to have more friends when I was young, but I\'ve changed over time.  

 It\'s more important which is \" Do i have truly friends around me? \" 

>> I realized that having true friends around me is more important.

 I think that I value substance more than quantity of friends.

>> I think that I value substance more than the quantity of friends.
>> or: In my view, substance is more valuable and meaningful than quantity.


 I met a lot of people while i lived in other country. 

>> While living in different countries, I met countless people.


 When we got along together, we were happy and we had fun even though we don\'t keep in touch anymore.

>> correct

 It\'s a precious memory also I met some of really good friends but most of them are just passed by that\'s why I don\'t really like to meeting new people anymore. 

>> It\'s a precious memory for me. Also, I met some really good friends but most of them just passed through to teach me lessons in life that\'s why I don\'t like to meet new people anymore.

 (But one of funny thing is what my writing is it doesn\'t make sense because I am using Instagram and i am always keep on eyes how many new followers do i have? )

>> (But one funny thing is that my writing doesn\'t make sense because I\'m using Instagram and keep checking my number of followers.)

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