Do you like meeting new people?
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Yes, I do...
The reason why you ask me that question is that I look like I like to meet new people.Right? I\'m a curious woman. When I meet people for the first time, my brain starts to be full of my questions to them. I can\'t stop asking, even though it\'s not aloways a good manner..While I\'m asking them, I can get to know them well, learn lessons from their experiences and also it\'s easy for me and them to get closer, keep asking and answering. The best thing is that I can have a conversation with them for a long time.
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Yes, I do...
>> correct
The reason why you ask me that question is that I look like I like to meet new people.Right? I\'m a curious woman.
>> The reason why you asked me that question is that I look like I like to meet new people, right? I\'m a curious woman.
>> Actually, I asked you that question because we met for the first time on that day. Also, some people are not comfortable meeting or talking with a stranger.^^
When I meet people for the first time, my brain starts to be full of my questions to them.
>> When I meet people for the first time, my brain starts to be full of my questions about and for them.
>> or: I usually have a lot of questions in my mind when I meet people for the first time.
I can\'t stop asking, even though it\'s not always a good manner..While I\'m asking them, I can get to know them well, learn lessons from their experiences and also it\'s easy for me and them to get closer, keep asking and answering.
>> correct
The best thing is that I can have a conversation with them for a long time.
>> correct
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