Do you like meeting new people?

2020-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

The first time, thank you sir. you are very kind for me anyway I promise that will try to study English very well. answer your homework Yes, I do so I like travel. Because I can understand their cultures and meet a lot of people. If I meet new people, we talk about our life and then this is very interesting for me. so I feel so good because I meet you in the online.

강사 첨삭

Hi JM! Thanks for sending your homework. Cheers, Jean~~ 

The first time, thank you sir. you are very kind for me anyway I promise that will try to study English very well.
>> First, I\'d like to thank you for your kindness and I promise to study hard. 

HOMEWORK:

Yes, I do so I like travel. Because I can understand their cultures and meet a lot of people.
>> Yes, I do that\'s why I like traveling so I can understand other cultures and meet a lot of people. 

 If I meet new people, we talk about our life and then this is very interesting for me. so I feel so good because I meet you in the online.
>> If I meet new people, we can talk about our lives, and I find this very interesting. So I feel so good because I met you online.

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