Do you like meeting new people? Why is that?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. I tend to enjoy meeting new people. I can share our lives by having a conversation, and give and take some information from them. I also can get some energy by doing something with new people. Moreover, if I’m lucky, I can make best friends who will be with me forever. However, I’m always nervous when I meet new people for the first time. I know nothing about them so I need time and effort to get to know them.
By the way, the older I get, the harder I meet new people these days. I always want to meet good and polite people, but there are bad people anywhere. I try to avoid bad and rude people in my daily life. After doing that, I can’t enjoy meeting new people. I think the human relationship is difficult for me after my thirties. Also, we’re trying to avoid meeting someone outside because of the pandemic. We have to be careful each other from infection.
강사 첨삭
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Yes. I tend to enjoy meeting new people.
Yes. I tend to enjoy meeting new people.
>>> correct (Yes, I tend to enjoy meeting new people.)
I can share our lives by having a conversation, and give and take some information from them.
>>> OR: We can share our lives by having a conversation, and give and take some information with them.
I also can get some energy by doing something with new people.
>>> I can also be energized by doing something with new people.
Moreover, if I’m lucky, I can make best friends who will be with me forever.
>>> OR: Moreover, if I’m lucky, I can meet best friends who will be with me forever.
However, I’m always nervous when I meet new people for the first time.
>>> correct
I know nothing about them so I need time and effort to get to know them.
>>> correct
By the way, the older I get, the harder I meet new people these days.
>>> correct
I always want to meet good and polite people, but there are bad people anywhere.
>>> correct
I try to avoid bad and rude people in my daily life.
>>> correct
After doing that, I can’t enjoy meeting new people.
>>> correct
I think the human relationship is difficult for me after my thirties.
>>> correct
Also, we’re trying to avoid meeting someone outside because of the pandemic.
>>> correct
We have to be careful each other from infection.
>>> We have to be careful with each other from infection.
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