Do you like meeting new poeple?
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I love meeting new people. because I want to have many friends. If I have many people, I can hang out with them. Then friendship will be deeper than before. And I will be able to be popular among friends. I can be famous. And having many people is very exciting.
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Jean
I love meeting new people. because I want to have many friends.
>> I love meeting new people because I want to have many friends.
If I have many people, I can hang out with them.
>> If I know many people, I can hang out with them.
Then friendship will be deeper than before. And I will be able to be popular among friends. I can be famous. And having many people is very exciting.
>> Then friendship can blossom and it\'s likely that I will become popular among my friends. I can be famous and having many people around me feels very exciting.
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