Do you like over ground or underground trains?

2019-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

학생이 쓴 원문

I definitely like over ground trains. because overground trains when running the route, i can see the view passing by landscape. when i was young. it is very interested for me. Because i experienced street scene that i haven\'t seen ever That experience still enjoys to me. so i tend to prefer the over ground train if i could choose and bus too! but sometimes it\'s different when this cold winter or hot summer. i definitely like look at the view that i take the overground train. even though preference can\'t beat the weather. The conclusion is l like both of them. they are very convenient public transportation for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!  It is nice to have a good view while travelling but some people plan on sleeping while on the train. They definitely miss out a lot. ~~T.Dee


I definitely like over ground trains.

>>CORRECT!
because overground trains when running the route, i can see the view passing by landscape.

>>Because when over ground trains are running the route, I can see the view the landscape while the train passes.
when i was young. it is very interested for me.

>>When I was young, it was very interesting for me.
 Because i experienced street scene that i haven\'t seen ever

>> It\'s because I\'ve experienced viewing street scenes that I haven\'t seen before.
 That experience still enjoys to me.

>>That experience is still enjoyable for me.
 so i tend to prefer the over ground train if i could choose and bus too!

>>So, I tend to prefer the over ground train if i could  make a choice, or a bus!
but sometimes it\'s different when this cold winter or hot summer.

>>But sometimes it\'s different when it\'s winter or summer.
 i definitely like look at the view that i take the overground train.

>> I definitely like to look at the view while riding the over ground train.
even though preference can\'t beat the weather.

>>My preference is not affected by the weather.
The conclusion is l like both of them.

>>CORRECT!
they are very convenient public transportation for me.

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