Do you like playing in the playground when it is raining?
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I haven’t played in the playground that much when it is raining but I think it would be exciting. Firstly, I like the sound splash, splash when I’m jumping in the puddle in the rainy day. Secondly, I would like to play on the slide getting all wet when it’s raining. It would be awesome but my mom wouldn’t like what my all cloths wet. Lastly, I feel like the view outside is like a cyberpunk city unlike normal days when it is raining.
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I haven’t played in the playground that much when it is raining but I
think it would be exciting. Firstly, I like the sound splash, splash
when I’m jumping in the puddle in the rainy day. Secondly, I would like
to play on the slide getting all wet when it’s raining. It would be
awesome but my mom wouldn’t like what my all cloths wet. Lastly, I feel
like the view outside is like a cyberpunk city unlike normal days when
it is raining.
>> I haven’t played in the playground that much when it is raining but I
think it would be exciting. Firstly, I like the splash sound of the rain, splash
when I’m jumping on the puddle on a rainy day. Secondly, I would like
to play on the slide getting all wet when it’s raining. It would be
awesome but my mom wouldn’t like when all my clothes are wet. Lastly, I feel
like the view outside is like a cyberpunk city unlike normal days when
it is raining.
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