Do you like playing in the sand?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s half in hlaf.
It \'s half in half because I sometimes want to play, and sometimes I don\'t want to play.
I haven\'t make a sand castles.
But I made a sand fild.
What do made when you are child?
These are the reasons why I half in half playing in the sand.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille
It\'s half in hlaf.
>> It\'s half and half.
It\'s half in half because I sometimes want to play, and sometimes I don\'t want to play.
>> It\'s half and half because I sometimes want to play, but sometimes, I don\'t.
I haven\'t make a sand castles.
>> I haven\'t tried making sand castles.
But I made a sand fild.
>> But I have made a sand field.
What do made when you are child?
>> What have you tried making when you were a child?
These are the reasons why I half in half playing in the sand.
>> These are the reasons why I somewhat like playing in the sand.
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