Do you like poetry? What makes it attractive/unattractive (interesting/uninteresting) for you?
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I like reading literatures but, poetry is not my interest. The rhyming and rhythm of poetry is still interesting but length of poetry isn’t enough to fully and deeply understand the content. Poetry is including very meaningful and warmhearted story in it, and they should express it with short amount of paragraph and they should even rhyme every word and make a rhythm in the end. Poetry shows beautiful looking of literature, but it’s too short or hard to give understanding of the content to every reader.
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I like reading literatures but, poetry is not my interest.
>>> I like reading literature, but poetry is not my interest.
The rhyming and rhythm of poetry is still interesting but length of poetry isn’t enough to fully and deeply understand the content.
>>> The rhyming and rhythm in poetry are still interesting, but the length of most poems isn’t enough to fully and deeply understand the content.
Poetry is including very meaningful and warmhearted story in it, and they should express it with short amount of paragraph and they should even rhyme every word and make a rhythm in the end.
>>> Poetry often includes very meaningful and warmhearted stories, but poets must express them in just a small number of lines, while also making the words rhyme and follow a rhythm.
Poetry shows beautiful looking of literature, but it’s too short or hard to give understanding of the content to every reader.
>>> Poetry shows the beautiful side of literature, but it’s often too short or too difficult for every reader to fully understand.
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