Do you like rainy days? Why or why not?

2018-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

학생이 쓴 원문

I like rainy days. But if someone ask me the reason why do you like a rain, I can't explain the reason clearly. It's good to just look at the rainy.I am used to look at the rain for a long time through the window inside of my home. Then, I am feeling in a good mood and become a pleasant. Also, I sometimes enjoy walking in the rain even though I use an umbrella. This is one thing that make me pleasant. Moreover the next day after rainy day, generally the atmosphere is clean and clear. It is another good effect of rain.

강사 첨삭

Hi Dr. [이름]!

Thank you again for answering the questions!

You did well! Good job!

Have a great day and talk to you soon!

Teacher ELLY.

ESSAY QUESTION: Do you like rainy days? Why or why not?

I like rainy days.

CORRECT!

or>> I enjoy days when it is raining.

But if someone ask me the reason why do you like a rain, I can\'t explain the reason clearly.

>>But if someone asks me the reason why I like the rain, I can\'t explain the reason clearly.

It\'s good to just look at the rainy.

>>It\'s good to just look at the rain.

I am used to look at the rain for a long time through the window inside of my home.

>>I am used to looking at the rain for a long time, through the window, inside my home.

Then, I am feeling in a good mood and become a pleasant.

>>Then, I will be in a good mood and become pleasant.

or>>Then, I start feeling good and become very pleasant.

Also, I sometimes enjoy walking in the rain even though I use an umbrella.

CORRECT!

or>>Also, there are times, when I take pleasure in walking under the rain even if I have to hold an umbrella.

This is one thing that make me pleasant.

>>This is one thing that gives me pleasure.

Moreover the next day after rainy day, generally the atmosphere is clean and clear.

>>Moreover, the day after a rainy day, generally, the atmosphere is clean and clear.

or>>Most often, the day after a rain, the air is generally clean and very clear.

It is another good effect of rain. 

>>It is another good effect of the rain. 

or >>It is also another positive result of the rain. 

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