Do you like rainy days? Why or why not?
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ESSAY QUESTION: Do you like rainy days? Why or why not?
I like rainy days.
CORRECT!
or>> I enjoy days when it is raining.
But if someone ask me the reason why do you like a rain, I can\'t explain the reason clearly.
>>But if someone asks me the reason why I like the rain, I can\'t explain the reason clearly.
It\'s good to just look at the rainy.
>>It\'s good to just look at the rain.
I am used to look at the rain for a long time through the window inside of my home.
>>I am used to looking at the rain for a long time, through the window, inside my home.
Then, I am feeling in a good mood and become a pleasant.
>>Then, I will be in a good mood and become pleasant.
or>>Then, I start feeling good and become very pleasant.
Also, I sometimes enjoy walking in the rain even though I use an umbrella.
CORRECT!
or>>Also, there are times, when I take pleasure in walking under the rain even if I have to hold an umbrella.
This is one thing that make me pleasant.
>>This is one thing that gives me pleasure.
Moreover the next day after rainy day, generally the atmosphere is clean and clear.
>>Moreover, the day after a rainy day, generally, the atmosphere is clean and clear.
or>>Most often, the day after a rain, the air is generally clean and very clear.
It is another good effect of rain.
>>It is another good effect of the rain.
or >>It is also another positive result of the rain.
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