Do you like riding on a plane?
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I actually don’t like riding on a long plane. Sitting for hours without moving is so hard for me. When I have a short flight like taking 1~2hours, after I sleep I’m already arrived. However, I have a long flight like more than 5 hours it makes me uncomfortable, it is super boring. There is no Wi-Fi so I even can’t play video game. I once have thrown up when I was 6 years old. It was terrible.
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Hi [이름]!
See you tomorrow ^^
T. DON
I actually don’t like riding on a long plane. Sitting for hours without
moving is so hard for me. When I have a short flight like taking
1~2hours, after I sleep I’m already arrived. However, I have a long
flight like more than 5 hours it makes me uncomfortable, it is super
boring. There is no Wi-Fi so I even can’t play video game. I once have
thrown up when I was 6 years old. It was terrible.
>> I actually don’t like riding on a plane with a long flight. Sitting for hours without
moving is so hard for me. When I sleep and the flight is 1~2hours, I didn\'t notice that I already arrived in our destination when I wake up. However, when I have a long
flight like more than 5 hours, it makes me uncomfortable, it is super
boring. There is no Wi-Fi so I even can’t play video games. I once have
thrown up when I was 6 years old. It was terrible.
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