Do you like shopping?
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I don’t like shopping that much. The first reason is that I don’t like to be surrounded by many people. It makes me feel uncomfortable. Secondly, There are not many things I want to buy so when I go to mart with my mom I usually do not buy anything. Lastly it is hard for me to move around for hours. It makes me so tired. However I buy something that I really want online once in a while.
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>> I don’t like shopping that much. The first reason is that I don’t
like to be surrounded by many people. It makes me feel uncomfortable.
Secondly, There are not many things I want to buy so when I go to a mart
with my mom I usually do not buy anything. Lastly it is hard for me to
move around for hours. It makes me so tired. However I buy something
that I really want online once in a while.
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