Do you like shopping for new clothes?

2019-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

yes I am. I like buy something what I want or useful to me. When I stayed in Korea, I had been web-shopping a lot. Even if I don\'t want to buy something and I don\'t have any idea for shopping, I can see many advertisement in my smartphone and laptop. So, I bought a lot of things include useless to me. Also, I went to shopping with my friends but I usually prefer Internet shopping because it is easier and cheaper than off-line shopping. Fortunately, I know my clothes size very well so that I just can buy new clothes in my house with few clicking.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jay!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

yes I am.

>> Yes, I do like shopping.

I like buy something what I want or useful to me. 

>> I like buying something that I want or useful to me.

When I stayed in Korea, I had been web-shopping a lot. 

>> When I was staying in Korea, I had been online shopping a lot. 

Even if I don\'t want to buy something and I don\'t have any idea for shopping, I can see many advertisement in my smartphone and laptop. 

>> Even if I don\'t want to buy something and I don\'t have any idea what to shop for, I see many advertisements in my smartphone and laptop. 

So, I bought a lot of things include useless to me. 

>> So I bought a lot of things that are useless to me. 

Also, I went to shopping with my friends but I usually prefer Internet shopping because it is easier and cheaper than off-line shopping. 

>> I also go shopping with my friends but I usually prefer online shopping because it is easier and cheaper than shopping in stores. 

Fortunately, I know my clothes size very well so that I just can buy new clothes in my house with few clicking.

>> Fortunately, I know my clothes size very well so I can just buy new clothes at my house with just a few clicks.

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