Do you like shopping for new clothes?
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Hello Jay!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
yes I am.
>> Yes, I do like shopping.
I like buy something what I want or useful to me.
>> I like buying something that I want or useful to me.
When I stayed in Korea, I had been web-shopping a lot.
>> When I was staying in Korea, I had been online shopping a lot.
Even if I don\'t want to buy something and I don\'t have any idea for shopping, I can see many advertisement in my smartphone and laptop.
>> Even if I don\'t want to buy something and I don\'t have any idea what to shop for, I see many advertisements in my smartphone and laptop.
So, I bought a lot of things include useless to me.
>> So I bought a lot of things that are useless to me.
Also, I went to shopping with my friends but I usually prefer Internet shopping because it is easier and cheaper than off-line shopping.
>> I also go shopping with my friends but I usually prefer online shopping because it is easier and cheaper than shopping in stores.
Fortunately, I know my clothes size very well so that I just can buy new clothes in my house with few clicking.
>> Fortunately, I know my clothes size very well so I can just buy new clothes at my house with just a few clicks.
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