Do you like spending time in other peoples\' houses

2019-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I don\'t like spending time in other peoples\'s houses. I prefer like spending time in my house. It is more conveient and relax. And I like to stay my face without makeup. If I spend time in other peoples\'s houses, I can\'t have face without makeup. Beacause I\'m shy to wash my face. So I like spending time in my house and I will care for my face skin natually.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Kate!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

I don\'t like spending time in other peoples\'s houses.

>> I don\'t like spending time in other peoples\' houses.

I prefer like spending time in my house.

>> I prefer spending time in my house.

It is more conveient and relax.
And I like to stay my face without makeup.

>> It is more convenient, relaxing and I like to stay home without my make up on.

If I spend time in other peoples\'s houses, I can\'t have face without makeup.
Beacause I\'m shy to wash my face.

>> If I spend time in other peoples\' houses, I can\'t show them my face without makeup because I\'m shy.

So I like spending time in my house and I will care for my face skin natually.

>> So, I like spending time in my house and I can take care for my face naturally.

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