Do you like taking selfies? Why?
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강사 첨삭
This is beautiful, Lily!
You just unlocked your photography and creative skills. Keep on doing the things you like. Taking selfies has been wide-spread in the social media these days, because other people filter everything to make their selfies likeable. Let\'s not make it a habit, because if we will, then we are just creating a fantasy life for ourselves.
~Teacher Eunice
I took a lot of selfies in the past, but now I take selfies sometimes.
>>> I took a lot of selfies in the past, but now I don\'t often take selfies anymore.
Because I don\'t do full makeup everyday so I don\'t usually take selfies well.
>>> Because I don\'t do full makeup every day, so I don\'t usually take selfies well.
Whenever I meet friend, I take selfies with my friends.!
>>> Whenever I meet my friends, I take selfies with them.
>> OR: I take selfies with my friends whenever I meet them.
I like taking photos of flowers, sky, street cats etc.. more than selfies so there are many flower photos in my cellphone album.
>>> I like taking photos of flowers, sky, street cats more than selfies, so there are many flower photos in my cellphone\'s album.
Someday I will print the photos of flowers on my album and I will gather many flower photos which I took! <3
>>> Someday, I will print out the photos of flowers on my album, and I will take as many flower photos as I can.
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