Do you like taking vitamins or supplements? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like taking vitamins instead of supplements. There are differnt types of vitamin products, and I have a chidish taste. So, I prefer a gummy jelly or a powder because they are delicious to eat.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Judy!
I never thought that your tongue never grew older! Well, medicine better taste like when we were children so that we can enjoy taking them when we are sick. Sometimes, it is hard to swallow a bitter pill.
Below, take note of the spelling and the grammar suggestions I made to your third sentence to make it easier to understand. Well done!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
There are differnt types of vitamin products, and I have a chidish taste.
>> Correct!
Or: SPELLING: different/ childish
So, I prefer a gummy jelly or a powder because they are delicious to eat.
>> Correct!
Or: So, I prefer gummy jelly or powder based because they are delicious to take.
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