Do you like the culture of the giving money gift during holidays?
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Although it doesn\'t look attractive, it\'s very reasonable and effective.
Some of things those we were gifted are abandoned even without using.
What a waste!
So, by giving them money they can choose own gift.
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Although it doesn\'t look attractive, it\'s very reasonable and effective.
>>> OR: Although it doesn\'t look attractive, it\'s very reasonable and efficient.
Some of things those we were gifted are abandoned even without using.
>>> Some of the things that we were gifted are abandoned even without being used.
What a waste!
>>> correct
So, by giving them money they can choose own gift.
So, by giving them money they can choose own gift.
>>> So, by giving them money, they can choose to buy their own gift.
>>> OR: So, by giving them money, they can choose their own gift to buy.
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