Do you like the environment in your country?

2021-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

I am satisfied the life of my country. I think that a safety is the most important. Korean safety is well done. It is safe to spend time till late.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! I am glad that you answered your homework. Thank you for being participative all the time. See you in our class. Have a wonderful day! :)

- Teacher Sophia


I am satisfied the life of my country.

>> I am satisfied in the environment of my country.

I think that a safety is the most important.

>> Correct
Korean safety is well done. It is safe to spend time till late.

>> Korean safety is good. It is safe to spend time outside until late night.

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