Do you like to be busy, or do you like to have an easy schedule?

2020-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I like to have an easy schedule. When I have a busy shedule, I usually feel nervous because I have to get things done in a short time. Sometimes I make mistake and have a difficulty concentrating on what I am doing. So I prefer an easy schedule that I can spend enough time on what I am doing.

강사 첨삭

Hey, [이름]. Thank you for taking the time and getting your homework done. I appreciate it. I think I would agree with you. I prefer an easy schedule to give me enough time to concentrate on my tasks and get them done with minimal mistakes.^^ Have a good night. ~ Teacher Jane 


I like to have an easy schedule. 
>>> CORRECT =) 

When I have a busy shedule, I usually feel nervous because I have to get things done in a short time.
>>> When I have a busy schedule, I usually feel nervous because I have to get things done in a short time.

Sometimes I make mistake and have a difficulty concentrating on what I am doing.
>>> Sometimes I make mistakes and have difficulty concentrating on what I am doing. 

So I prefer an easy schedule that I can spend enough time on what I am doing.
>>> CORRECT =) 

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