Do you like to be busy, or do you like to have an easy schedule?
학생이 쓴 원문
I know that a busy schedule is good for my life.
However I like to have an easy schedule because busy schedule make me tired.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
I hope that you can find time to relax despite your hectic schedule. But, know when to spice up your life, too.
See you in class.^^
Kelly
I know that a busy schedule is good for my life.
>> Correct
However I like to have an easy schedule because busy schedule make me tired.
>> However, I like to have an easy schedule because a busy schedule makes me tired.
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