Do you like to go to places where there are lots of other people or to more isolated places? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I really don\'t like to go crowded places.
Those places usually very noisy and it feels like taking away all of my energy.
I prefer to spend sound time at quiet cafes or parks.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. I appreciate you doing your homework. I hope you spent some quiet and quality time with your grandmother yesterday. I hope it was not too crowded where you went. Let\'s talk again in class later. See you. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
I really don\'t like to go crowded places.
>>> I really don\'t like to go to crowded places.
>>> OR: I really don\'t like going to crowded places.
Those places usually very noisy and it feels like taking away all of my energy.
>>> Those places are usually very noisy and I feel like it is taking away all of my energy.
I prefer to spend sound time at quiet cafes or parks.
>>> CORRECT =)
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