Do you like to go to the supermarket? How often do you go?
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I have to go there once or twice a week because of cooking.
I also enjoy window shopping there like in a department store.
There are many kind of things,fresh fruits,fish,vegetables,snacks and etc.
I usually buy fruits,vegetables, and meats my husband like.
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I have to go there once or twice a week because of cooking.
>> I have to go there once or twice a week because I have to cook.
I also enjoy window shopping there like in a department store.
I also enjoy window shopping there like in a department store.
>> Correct
There are many kind of things,fresh fruits,fish,vegetables,snacks and etc.
There are many kind of things,fresh fruits,fish,vegetables,snacks and etc.
>> There are many kinds of things there like fresh fruits, fish, vegetables, snacks and others.
I usually buy fruits,vegetables, and meats my husband like.
I usually buy fruits,vegetables, and meats my husband like.
>> I usually buy fruits, vegetables, and meat which my husband likes.
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