Do you like to gossip? Have you ever told a rumor that got someone in trouble?
학생이 쓴 원문
I extremely hate a gossip.
Although I have not told a rumor, I did see a lot of bad effect of rumor.
For example, star entertainers are always under being talked behind their back.
Occasionally, they commit suicide, because of some bad rumors.
I hereby think that backbiting is a mean thing.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Mr. [이름].
From your sentences, it seems like you have a lot of experiences when it comes to
gossip. Kidding!^^
Thank you for sharing your ideas.
If you have questions regarding the corrections, feel free to ask me
during class.
Take care!^^~~Teacher Erine~~
I extremely hate a gossip.
>> CorrectAlthough I have not told a rumor, I did see a lot of bad effect of rumor.
>> Although I have not told a rumor yet, I did see a lot of bad effects of rumors. For example, star entertainers are always under being talked behind their back.
>> For example, star entertainers are always being talked about behind their back.Occasionally, they commit suicide, because of some bad rumors.
>> Occasionally, they commit suicide because of some bad rumors.I hereby think that backbiting is a mean thing.
>>Correct
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