Do you like to improve things?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, What do you want thing to improve? Today I will tell of you 'which is like to improve things'.
First of all, I want to improve my appearance. Um.. I think Many people wants to improve their appearance. So, I want to that too.
강사 첨삭
Hello, What do you want thing to improve?
Today I will tell of you \'which is like to improve things\'.
>>Today I will tell of you \'which is like to improve things\'.
First of all, I want to improve my appearance.
>>CORRECT
Um.. I think Many people wants to improve their appearance. So, I want to that too.
>>Um.. I think many people wants to improve their appearance. So, I want to that too.
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