Do you like to lend your things to others? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
It seems to depend on the importance of my things.
It because I don\'t lend things that I like and think are important, and I don\'t like to lend them, but I like to lend things that aren\'t.
For example, I don\'t lend electronics well and I don\'t like to lend them, but I like to lend pencils. In addition, I don\'t like to lend things related to hyginene and privacy.
But when I think abbout it, I don\'t think I like lending things to others.
It\'s because if I lend something and lose it, I\'ll be disappointed and I think I\'ll hate my friend. Also, I don\'t like lending things and lending them because I think I\'ll have the stress of continuing to wonder and worry.
강사 첨삭
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It seems to depend on the importance of my things.
>> CORRECT.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I guess it depends on how valuable my stuff is to me.
It because I don\'t lend things that I like and think are important, and I don\'t like to lend them, but I like to lend things that aren\'t.
>> It’s because I don’t lend things that I like or find important, but I don’t mind lending things that aren’t.
For example, I don\'t lend electronics well and I don\'t like to lend them, but I like to lend pencils.
>> For example, I don’t usually lend electronics, but I don’t mind lending pencils.
In addition, I don\'t like to lend things related to hyginene and privacy.
>> In addition, I don’t like to lend things related to hygiene or privacy.
But when I think abbout it, I don\'t think I like lending things to others.
>> But when I think about it, I realize I don’t really like lending things to others.
It\'s because if I lend something and lose it, I\'ll be disappointed and I think I\'ll hate my friend.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: If something I lend goes missing, I’ll probably feel upset with my friend.
Also, I don\'t like lending things and lending them because I think I\'ll have the stress of continuing to wonder and worry.
>> Also, I don’t like lending things because it stresses me out—I keep wondering and worrying about them.
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