Do you like to relax during the weekend? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Not really. Because I need to do my own homework and practice the piano and so on. And relaxing is not fit to me. Because I don\'t have many concentration. So I don\'t like to relax during the weekend.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] U! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Not really.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I need to do my own homework and practice the piano and so on.
>>> Because I need to do my own homework, practice the piano and so on.
And relaxing is not fit to me.
>>> And relaxing is not fit for me.
Because I don\'t have many concentration.
>>> Because I don\'t have much concentration.
So I don\'t like to relax during the weekend.
>>> CORRECT!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.