Do you like to take guided tours or explore a place by yourself?

2015-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Whether you take the guided tour or not depends on your personality and preferences. Personally, I like the flexibility of traveling on my own. You can see and do the exact things that interest you and also can change your plans if you run across a local festival or event that appeals to you. The downside of traveling alone is that you might have a hard time visiting a resturant or getting support in an emergency. You need to stay healthy all the time. The group travel requires you to do less organizing and provides someone that can explain what you're seeing if you have questions. In the major tourist destinations, you won't have any trouble getting around using English. In some of the smaller cities, you might have some difficulties in communicating with local people, however, even such an experience will be a good memory and lasts longer. However, if you are a woman, I would recommend that you choose a guided tour rather than traveling alone for your safety.

강사 첨삭

T.G.I.F. Sir [이름]!

Yes! Another week and month is finished.

I am so thankful that we are having great conversations in class.

You were able to explain the pros and cons of traveling alone or taking a guided tour.

In my case, I prefer to travel alone or with friends. Hihihi.

Because I like taking pictures and I might be left behind when I take the guided tour.

Thanks for your wonderful ideas.  Talk to you very soon.
Teacher Nina


Whether you take the guided tour or not depends on your personality and preferences.

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>>  It depends on your personality preferences whether you take the guided tour or not.

Personally, I like the flexibility of traveling on my own.

>> correct

You can see and do the exact things that interest you and also can change your plans if you run across a local festival or event that appeals to you.

>> correct

The downside of traveling alone is that you might have a hard time visiting a resturant or getting support in an emergency.

>> correct

You need to stay healthy all the time.

>> correct

The group travel requires you to do less organizing and provides someone that can explain what you\'re seeing if you have questions.

>> correct

In the major tourist destinations, you won\'t have any trouble getting around using English.

>> correct

In some of the smaller cities, you might have some difficulties in communicating with local people, however, even such an experience will be a good memory and lasts longer.

>> correct

>> In some of the smaller cities, you might have some difficulties in communicating with local people. However, it is even such an experience that will be a good memory and lasts long.

However, if you are a woman, I would recommend that you choose a guided tour rather than traveling alone for your safety.

>> correct

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