Do you like to travel to work or to enjoy? Share your answer in a short paragraph.
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer to travel to enjoy rather than to travel to work. Travel is a chance to depart from my daily routine, so it should be under the happy and comfortable condition, but work can cause stress.
강사 첨삭
Hi Judy!
Now that you are young, you can definitely have more travel for leisure then eventually when you need to work, you have to travel for business. In whichever purpose you have, you can relax during the travelling hours, seize the beautiful sights, and experience the culture of the people in a particular place.
Thank you for this answer once again. Have a great weekend to you!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Travel is a chance to depart from my daily routine, so it should be under the happy and comfortable condition, but work can cause stress.
>> Correct!
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